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One More Taste
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One More Taste
I look at your eyes, so calm and brilliant
You hold me close closing your lips
You mutter words that are so vibrant
You lock your lips upon my cheek
Everyday so far away, even more at your door
You ask me this, for one last kiss
For surely you can’t go on
Are you so strong? Are you not happy?
For I am as true as the color blue
You approach me once more holding my waist
Holding ever so tight , “What is this?”
“My last kiss won’t be yet.” , a smile
Crawls upon my face, For now I had it
One more taste
I look at your eyes, so calm and brilliant
You hold me close closing your lips
You mutter words that are so vibrant
You lock your lips upon my cheek
Everyday so far away, even more at your door
You ask me this, for one last kiss
For surely you can’t go on
Are you so strong? Are you not happy?
For I am as true as the color blue
You approach me once more holding my waist
Holding ever so tight , “What is this?”
“My last kiss won’t be yet.” , a smile
Crawls upon my face, For now I had it
One more taste
ilu10-20-07a&&f
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I can sense that you want to create more hidden sorts of rhymes without creating awkwardness in your syllable use but one thing that I use for this is a site called Rhyme Zone ([link] ); you can really get a huge amount of usable rhymes that they have. Some rhymes they don't have on there but they should have what you need. They categorize rhymes by syllables which can be really useful.